Review Instructions

Document Access

• NEW: If you have not reviewed the below linked paper yet, you can now review here (instead of the below link) the following shortened version of the doc that we target for publication first: FINAL: CAMARA MCP position paper for publicationPreview

  • NOTE: Comments provided on the below (thanks !) will of course be considered.

• REPLACED BY ABOVE: Review the white paper at: Link to In Concert: Bridging AI Systems and Network Infrastructure through MCP

• Full URL (Copy and Paste): https://acrobat.adobe.com/id/urn:aaid:sc:US:41a3c981-ce98-45d2-a70c-6d452d17375d

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TSC Review Scope

• Focus on Chapters 1-7 (main body).

• The appendix (p. 22+) is still in design and excluded from this review.

Timeline

• Review: Oct 28 - Nov 7

• Comment integration: Nov 8-9

• Final approval: Nov 10-11

• Publication: Nov 12 (KubeCon aligned)

Note: All comments are visible to other reviewers. Focus on content accuracy over structural suggestions.